Sometimes your mind has its own rhythm.
Very impressive.!:-) I love this.The frame with bottle & the transformation of emotions made masterly.Given a professional script I think Rispau can create magic.
Would be much much better in terms of the structure of the story if we could know;
What drives this man to a night like this?Why he ends up that way?
The reasons behind.Even a slight hint would work.
Unfortunately I noticed @ a lot of shorts the story is ignored.Director of photography great,cool pictures & cool music but what is going on?Why?
There are fundamental questions to be asked before making a movie.Without the basic elements of Drama structure,most of the short movies become like a slice of a cake.A short clip but not a movie.
Doesn't matter how short it is there has to be the rules of begining,the peak ( that is the moment we see the realization,the change...etc starts of ) & the end.Of course we have to see this or that way the times these improvements take place.
Hi, it's been a while since i don´t enter this web. Just see your comment. Thanks for you opinion, I really like to take care of story, this short just came from a night of brainstorming, it's for free interpretation. Really appreciate your comment.